COME ONE, COME ALL / June 11
by Carolee, Deb & Jill
It’s show time! It’s time to post your original poem, written in response to Monday’s prompt — write an angry pantoum — or any other inspiration from the week. (We love it when you write to our prompt, but we also love it when you write on a whim. We all know how fickle that muse can be.)
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One other thing
So it might be more than one. Read our barkers’ articles, if you haven’t recently. Great stuff. Here’s the list of links.
The Angry Man
Is it easier to let your feelings fly
Words you may regret someday
That flash like lightning in the sky -
Do you remember what you say?
Words you may regret someday?
You’d rather stun with power and might
Can you remember what you say as you
Blast them with your dynamite.?
You’d rather stun with your power and might
“Don’t mess with me!” your battle cry
Blast them all with your dynamite
You’ll still be right on the day you die.
“Don’t mess with me!” Your battle cry
Everyone hears you, far and near
Alone and right on the day you die
No one around to shed a tear.
My first try at a pantoum. I made it short.
Hi Marian — it’s thundering and lightning here…perfect venue to read your poem. I know men like that — “alone and right on the day you die.”
Congratulations on your first!
You gave the poem powerful last lines — no matter the length, they were enough to set off the aloneness.
Marian, You did a great job with your line “blast them with your dynamite.” It works, well yet comes across differently each time. I’m with Linda…I know a few people (men and women both!) who espouse this line: “Alone and right on the day you die.”
My poem is here:
The Rag & Bone Shop
My poem is here Rats